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    When Danger Calls (Five Star Expressions)
    By Terry Odell
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    Say hello to Terry Odell

    Readers are always curious to find out where their favorite characters come from.  Every successful author has his/her own process for discovering the characters who are going to carry the story.  Today, I am pleased to host a visit from author Terry Odell who shares with us the process she used to discover two of the central figures in her recent release, When Danger Calls.  Terry writes romantic suspense, or, as she puts it, "romance with a twist -- of mystery."

    I know you all join me in welcoming Terry -

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    Characters Wanted


    Thanks to Jeff for inviting me to be his guest today.

     

    As a reader, a book is all about the characters. If I don't care about them, I don't care about whatever problems they face in the book. So, when I started writing, developing the characters was critical. How do authors find characters? I don't know about other writers, but for me, it's simple. I advertise.  See the results of the job interview for the heroine of my Five Star release, WHEN DANGER CALLS.

     

    Meet Frankie Castor … and Molly.

     

    "Yes?" I say when my secretary calls. I have a break between appointments, and I'm trying to refine some of my yet-to-be-discovered heroine's goals, motivations and conflicts.

     

    "We might have a problem with the next applicant," she says.

     

    I consult my list. Frances Marie Castor. Four o'clock. So far, all I've seen are women who look like they're applying for a job at a strip club, not an action-adventure romance heroine. True, there are a few scenes where the heroine will have to play a cocktail waitress, but that's not what I'm looking for. "What kind of problem?"

     

    "Her sitter can't make it, and she can't find anyone to take care of her daughter."

     

    "How old is the daughter?" I ask.

     

    After a moment, my secretary returns to the line. "She's almost five."

     

    I wonder. Would it asking too much that I might be able to cast both roles at once? "Tell her to bring her daughter along."

     

    Promptly at four, my secretary informs me Ms. Castor and her daughter have arrived. "Show them in," I say. Giving a silent prayer that this will be my final interview, I flip to a clean sheet of my notepad and turn my attention to the door.

     

    When it opens, my secretary leads the candidate in. She gives me a look that says, "Am I supposed to entertain the kid?"

     

    I give her a quick headshake. "Please come in, Ms. Castor." Outwardly, she's got promise. Honey-blonde, with clear, blue eyes. Minimal makeup, and a few strands of hair escape her ponytail. She's wearing khakis and a beige-and blue striped polo. Definitely not the stripper type. Girl next door all the way. My hopes lift a little higher. My gaze lowers to the child who's hanging back, clutching a backpack to her chest like a shield. Strawberry blonde, slight. Not exactly the image I had. For tension and conflict, I was looking for someone who resembled the Hispanic youngster Ryan Harper had failed to rescue before the book started.

     

    Frances hesitates. "I'm sorry for the … inconvenience, and I really appreciate you seeing me today. This is Molly." I detect a quick nudge to the child, who lifts her head and gives me a polite smile, still keeping her eyes downcast. "Hello."

     

    "Molly knows this is grownup time. She'll sit and read, or color. And will be very quiet." Another nudge.

     

    I get up, circle my desk, and crouch to Molly's level. "Hi, Molly. Do you like to read?"

     

    She nods.

     

    "Well, I love to read, and I love to write stories, too. What's your favorite book?"

     

    She meets my gaze with a smile, and her cobalt-blue eyes are irresistible. I'm already revising Molly's character description from a brown-eyed, dark-haired child to a blue-eyed strawberry blonde. Writing is all about the rewrites, after all.

     

    "Green Eggs and Ham," she says. "I have it in my pack. I can read it to Mr. Snuggles all by myself."

     

    "Very good," I say. I settle her on the loveseat against the wall. "You can read here while I talk to your mommy."

     

    Molly unzips her pack and takes out a well-worn copy of the Seuss classic. Next comes a well-worn, once-white stuffed dog, which she places on her lap. Mr. Snuggles, I presume. I make another mental note. As soon as she opens the book, she's reciting the familiar rhymes in soft tones.

     

    I haven't mentioned the role of a child, and I don't say anything yet. Casting children is a headache. I prefer to see them in their natural state, not performing, but it's almost impossible. Today is a rare exception.

     

    "Please sit down, Ms. Castor." I direct her to one of my client chairs. "Or should I call you Frances."

     

    "Call me Frankie," she says. "Only my mom calls me Frances, and then it's usually Frances Marie Castor, which means I'm in trouble." She sits. "Excuse my appearance. I had to come straight from work—I teach elementary school art—and I didn't have time to change. We've been working on collages."

     

    As she sits, I get a brief whiff of Elmer's glue. Much nicer than the cloying scents I've been exposed to all day. "Tell me why you applied for this job."

     

    She takes a breath. "Bottom line? The money."

     

    Honest, straightforward. I jot a note. "You mentioned you have a job. Teaching."

     

    "I'm only a sub while the regular teacher's on maternity leave. I had to move from Boston because my mother fell and broke her wrist, and my sister's husband got a great job, but it was in London, and they moved, and there was nobody to stay with Mom, so Molly and I moved out here and things are tight." She glanced at Molly, then gave me a quick grin. "Sorry. I … um … tend to babble when I'm nervous."

     

    "There's no need to be nervous. Tell me about yourself. Your backstory, as we say in the business."

     

    She jumps right in. "I was born in Broken Bow, Montana. I wanted to experience the city life, couldn't wait to get out. I wanted to be a photojournalist. Went to school in New York. Things got … complicated." She looks at Molly again, her gaze lingering this time. She turns back to me. "I ended up working for an interior design firm in Boston, until I got the call about Mom. And I'm worried about her. She forgets things, and the budget—well, it's in trouble, and the furnace needs to be fixed—replaced would be better—and there's Bob, her new boyfriend, and—" She gives me another wide grin. "I'm babbling again, aren't I?"

     

    I smile and add some notes to my page. "Not a problem." After making sure Molly is still engrossed in her book, I lean across my desk and lower my voice. "You do know that you'll have to have a consummated relationship for the job. Will that be a problem?"

     

    She, too, checks on Molly. "Do I have to be … you know … real experienced? Because I'm not looking for a man now. Not unless he's going to put Molly first, and I've pretty much given up on those. I haven't … you know … done it. Not since—" Another glance at Molly.

     

    "I've found that one experienced partner is usually enough," I say. "But it does happen on the page."

     

    She blushes a delightful shade of pink. "The guy isn't going to be a brute or anything, is he? Or too ... kinky?"

     

    "No, definitely not a brute. And I don't write erotica, so there's a very low kink quotient."

     

    After a brief moment of lip-chewing thought, she says, "I think I'll be fine with it. No, I know I'll be fine with it. There's always a bright side to anything, and a little romance, even pretend, seems like a definite bright side to me right about now."

     

    I run through the last few questions quickly, making sure she's willing to deal with a German Shepherd, and isn't afraid of horses or heights, before I drop the final question. "How would you feel about Molly being in the book with you?"

     

    Her eyes pop open. "I don't know. She's so young. It's an adult book, after all."

     

    "If she can differentiate between real and pretend, she can probably handle the job. And I'll run any of her scenes by you first, for approval."

     

    "That sounds fair. But those … romance scenes?"

     

    "Trust me, she won't be on the page during any … romance." With a smile, I add, "And she'll get paid for her time. Same rate as you."

     

    Frankie chews her lip again. She gets up and sits beside Molly. She whispers in her ear. Molly's eyes widen. She looks at me. "Can Mr. Snuggles be in the story too?"

     

    "Of course," I say. He'll be very important."

     

    Molly grins. She stuffs her book in her pack and dangles Mr. Snuggles in front of her face. "We can be in a storybook. Just like Sam I Am."

     

    Frankie crosses back to my desk, her hand outstretched. "We'll do it."

     

    I shake her hand and escort the pair to the door. "My secretary has the paperwork. We'll start Monday, if that's all right."

     

    "It'll be fine," Frankie says. They leave, and I tell my secretary to cancel tomorrow's appointments and to hold all my calls. I have some writing to do.

     

    WDC3x4

     

     

    Terry Odell writes mystery and action-adventure themed novels with elements of romance. You can find out more about her writing, including her interview with Ryan Harper, Frankie's hero, at her website, http://www.terryodell.com    

        

Comments (16)

  • crazy2love

    Ahhh I don't have time to read it all right now, but I will come back!! I wish I didn't have to go to work...

  • crazy2love

    That's a very interesting way to create and develop a character! I was entralled through every sentence.

  • anonymous

    Thanks so much - glad you enjoyed it. Ryan's interview is in the "Free Reads" section of my website.  And "The Other Side of the Page" is a free short-story read from Cerridwen Press, where I've not only interviewed Randy and Sarah from Finding Sarah and Hidden Fire, but I've also eavesdropped on them talking about me when they thought I wasn't around.

    Who says these characters aren't real! 

  • anonymous

    Hi Mom!!  ;)  Love the interviews, as always.

  • flatpick46

    That, was very cool! 

  • SamsPeeps
  • anonymous

    Thanks -- and for the record, with the exception of Jess, I'm not related to any of the other commenters. Nor did I offer bribes or any other perks for the kind words. I appreciate it -- those interviews are truly fun to write.

  • AprilsPlace

    Hi Terry,  Intriguing approach to writing...I enjoyed every line.

  • anonymous

    FASCINATING! I remained completely enthralled reading this! Honestly, I learn SO much about writers/authors and the different approaches and styles the have.  Great feature.

  • anonymous

    Well, although it says I can edit my post within a timeframe of 15 minutes, I couldn't figure out how...My statement should (obviously) read "...and the different approaches and styles THEY have..."  (DUH. And I'm a proofreader!)

  • doahsdeer

    Terry, I know it's a little off topic, but I'm curious whether you find any particular challenges or opportunities writing "cross-genre." 

    Jeff

  • anonymous

    CCP, I never pay attention to typos in blog comments -- most of the time the screen and font are so tiny I can't see what I'm typing. Just glad you're here! 

    Jeff: the short answer to your question:  "Yes."  Lots of challenges, lots of opportunities. With genre fiction, there are conventions to be followed. In romantic suspense, you're really writing 3 books: you have to have a character arc and story for BOTH hero and heroine (I choose not to do a villain POV), PLUS you have to write the mystery or suspense plot that moves the action. And they all have to be woven seamlessly. If you can remove the mystery and still have a story, it won't work. If you remove the relationship and still have the story, it won't work.

    I'm working on a straight mystery now, and I do have to rein in the characters when they insist on paying more attention to each other than the task at hand. Yes, I let them look. And maybe even have a little fun. But it's not the focus of the story; they story would work without it, but the characters wouldn't be as rich and layered.  And for me, it's all about the characters. And then there are my straight romance short stories. So, I'm writing in 3 genres, and having a wider range of 'product' is a better opportunity for publication, but it's still all about the writing.

    Sorry this dragged on! Sounds like a good topic for another blog.

  • maryannwrites

    What a fun way to introduce us to your characters, Terry. I loved your interview, and when the mother and daughter walked in to your office, I immediately thought of a real mother and daughter who came to audition for my play a few years ago. The mother was there to audition, but the daughter didn't even know there was a role for a child. I ended up casting them both and worked with them for several years in a number of productions. I couldn't help but think of them as I read the rest of the interview with Molly and Frankie.

  • anonymous

    Maryann, thanks for sharing that story. Fiction imitates life!  

  • Shahrazad1973

    One more I need to add to the reading list. Thank you!

  • anonymous

    Thanks, Shahrazad - I hope you enjoy it. 

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